This week we have two new Writer's of the Week. Both Wesley and Yasalde have made great improvement in their writing and I wanted to display their hard work! Great Job!!
Wesley- Nice use of transition words!
Yasalde- Good job saying what you did at the Mountains!
Dear Wesley,
ReplyDeleteI like your story and you have some interesting snowflakes.
--Amaru
Dear Yasalde,
ReplyDeleteI like your handwriting and I also like your pictures. Can you please tell me what the gray thing is? I also like your snowballs.
--Amaru
Dear Yasalde,
ReplyDeleteWow! I love your winter writing.I liked how your words and pictures worked together to tell a story. Have you ever been sledding before?
Mrs. Carey
I like your writing Yasalde. Your pictures are happy. Wesley I like your snowman.
ReplyDeletefrom your friend Milo
ReplyDeleteYasalde, I really like your picture of you on the mountains. Are those other people your friends. Keep up the good work! From a third grader!!!
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