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1st Grade

Thursday, January 16, 2014

Writers of the Week

We are pleased to present three awesome kindergarten writers this week. All three writers were hand picked by our class to show how well we have learned how to include transition words in our writing. As we narrowed down our writings to our top picks for the week, we decided that it was important to choose stories that had a beginning, middle, and end. We hope you enjoy our stories!!
Abby:
Jairo:
Emma:
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  1. AnonymousJanuary 16, 2014 at 4:35 PM

    Great stories and beautiful art work. Great job Abby, Jairo and Emma!

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  2. AnonymousJanuary 16, 2014 at 5:42 PM

    Awesome job!

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  3. UnknownJanuary 16, 2014 at 7:33 PM

    Dear Abby, I liked your story because you made nice drawings and sentences.
    -- Amaru

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  4. UnknownJanuary 16, 2014 at 7:35 PM

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  5. UnknownJanuary 16, 2014 at 7:36 PM

    Dear Emma, what an interesting story!
    PS. I like the flowers.
    --Amaru

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  6. UnknownJanuary 16, 2014 at 7:36 PM

    Dear Jairo, I liked your BIG snowman and the ginormous snowflakes.
    PS. Jairo, I like the buttons and the hat and the scarf. Red is my favorite color, you know!
    -- Amaru

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  7. Joe WoodJanuary 16, 2014 at 7:37 PM

    Mrs Kahler's Class,

    I love your stories and interesting pictures. I saw some snow over Winter Break. I hope we get more and some rain too. I love rainy days.

    Mr. Wood

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  8. AnonymousJanuary 16, 2014 at 7:52 PM

    Emma, I really like your writing. From Jacob

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  9. UnknownJanuary 16, 2014 at 8:51 PM

    Dear Star Writers,
    I am so impressed with your writing. Not only are your illustrations awesome, but your writing looks nice and you tell a good story.

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  10. Poppy's MomJanuary 17, 2014 at 9:49 AM

    Fabulous work Emma, Jairo and Abby! I look forward to reading more stories :)

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  11. AnonymousJanuary 17, 2014 at 6:16 PM

    I really enjoy reading the stories of the kindergarten class. Every time I read them I can see the improvement and the wonderful style each child is developing. The illustrations are wonderful too.....Amaru's Grandma Jeanne

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  12. KoriJanuary 17, 2014 at 8:16 PM

    I loved your stories! You did such a nice job adding details to your writing.

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